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Daniel M. Bensen's avatar

Oh, one more thing. I liked the omniscient narration. You even get into the "head" of a weapon. That's cool.

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Daniel M. Bensen's avatar

Less serious advice. More of a humble plea. Please don't make "terrestrum" the plural of "terrestrum." Please either go with Latinate "terrestra" or Anglisized "terrestrums." Same for the other "-um" words. Zero-suffix plurals make it harder to figure out what's going on.

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